August 6, 2009 · 11:10 pm
Change Your Point of View
Today I selected this card that challenges me to see things from a different point of view. In case you did not read my very first post, I am writing on a topic each evening to challenge myself as a writer. So tonight, I immediately thought of my dog Charlie. For one thing, I entered him in a contest for the cutest dog
so please vote for him every day and hopefully he will win, for another thing, I have been spending a lot of time with him this summer as I am home alone with him. Charlie is the subject of my writing, which I have decided to do in poetry form tonight.
My favorite time of the day is morning,
Then you chase me in the yard and we play
Hide and go seek,
We have our breakfast together.
I am devoted and loyal,
And I will prove it by sitting right on your feet,
Following you wherever you go
Just so you know how much I love you.
Sometimes, I doze while you read,
Dreaming of running, chasing, protecting.
But I will wake instantly if you get up.
I love treats
And reluctantly accept them when you put me in the garage
Before you go.
I don’t know when you will be back
It feels like I am alone for a long time
When I hear the car
I jump up.
You open the door
To my wagging tail, and my smile.
My whiskers are gray now and
My hips stiff after my afternoon nap
Sleepy as I am, I will follow you
Into the bedroom at the end of the evening
And settle down in my bed
Comforted by the steady breathing,
The hum of the fan
The cool breeze
4 responses to “Change Your Point of View”
That is soooo nice and well written. I loved it!
awwww….Charlie dogger! Remember mom’s notes to us FROM the dogs to clean up the yard? She was too funny!
Very good poem – it sounds just like Charlie dog!